for this assignment, we had to track something for a period of time. i tracked the snow outside my window.
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1. The artist documented the amount of snow outside of her window each day for 5.5 days. She got her data at two different times of day, and tracked how much melted by taking pictures. There's really only one set of data.
2. She is trying to show that despite a rather large average snowfall in Syracuse, the weather is not always the same. The week she collected data was unusually warm, causing many of the pictures/documentation to look the same.
3.I think her format conveys her information well. It is easy to understand what she was trying to do. The pictures of the snow were well taken and accurately showed the change from day to day.
4. I wasn't really confused by the piece. It was well constructed and displayed.
5. I really loved how the music directly related to the topic and pictures. The facts at the beginning were also really helpful in completely understanding the area she was collecting data from.I think the pictures could have been displayed a little bit longer so it's easier to see the difference from day to day.
I thought it was a great idea to take photos from the same spot in order to see how the snow melted and how quickly. It was interesting to see how slowly or quickly the snow melts. I think adding another element, such as the temperature of that day, would help your video and allow the viewers to figure out that on warmer days, the snow melted faster.
2 comments:
1. The artist documented the amount of snow outside of her window each day for 5.5 days. She got her data at two different times of day, and tracked how much melted by taking pictures. There's really only one set of data.
2. She is trying to show that despite a rather large average snowfall in Syracuse, the weather is not always the same. The week she collected data was unusually warm, causing many of the pictures/documentation to look the same.
3.I think her format conveys her information well. It is easy to understand what she was trying to do. The pictures of the snow were well taken and accurately showed the change from day to day.
4. I wasn't really confused by the piece. It was well constructed and displayed.
5. I really loved how the music directly related to the topic and pictures. The facts at the beginning were also really helpful in completely understanding the area she was collecting data from.I think the pictures could have been displayed a little bit longer so it's easier to see the difference from day to day.
Good job, Becca.
I thought it was a great idea to take photos from the same spot in order to see how the snow melted and how quickly. It was interesting to see how slowly or quickly the snow melts. I think adding another element, such as the temperature of that day, would help your video and allow the viewers to figure out that on warmer days, the snow melted faster.
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